“艾莉卡,艾莉卡,你看这个软件,自带翻译的功能呢。”

"呵呵,不过是机械翻译罢了,准确度能有几分呢?”

“还挺不错的哦!不信你看这一段!”

“所以……你决定杀了哲式的理由,是因为他报警了。对么?” 

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 “所以……你决定杀了哲式的理由,是因为他报警了。对么?”

"so... the reason you decided to kill Zhe was because he called the police, didn't you? "

(A:呵呵,第一句不管怎么说还是没问题呢。)

(L:所以说嘛……)

(A:仅仅是一句还不能说明说明,继续往下看吧。)

 拘留所内,鸣坐在莉子的对面,两人仅仅相隔一块不过3CM厚的玻璃。 

Inside, Ming sat opposite Liko, separated only by a piece of 3CM's glass.

(A:这一句就显得有些微妙了呢。)

(L:嗯……虽然不错是不错,但始终还是机翻。)

 “嗯,是的哦。”莉子的声音听起来十分轻松,一点也不像是在坦白罪行。如果非要形容的话,她就像在说自己做了一个小小的恶作剧一般,只是微不足道的小事。 

"well, yes." Liko's voice sounded relaxed, not at all as if she were confessing her guilt. If anything, she was saying she had done a little prank, just a trifle.

(A:呵呵,这一句艾莉卡都不知道该说是翻译得好还是不好了。)

 “啊哈哈,倒还真是正常而普通的理由呢。”,说道正常而普通这几个字的时候,鸣很明显加重了语气,“一点也不像杀人鬼呢。” 

"Ah ha ha, that's a normal and common reason," he said. "it's not like a murderer at all."

(A:简单的句子,但是后半句就显露出了机翻的痕迹。在这里,这个不正经男人的话中省略了一个词,“的行为”或者“的原因”(一点也不像杀人鬼会说的原因、会做的行动 呢)而机械翻译则直译为不像是杀人鬼。)

 “……” 

"..."

 莉子没有说话,只是对着鸣露出了意义不明的微笑。 

Lizi did not speak, but smiled at the whistle with an unknown meaning.

(L:啊!这个地方名字不是翻错了吗!)

 “秋野莉子……你……到底是什么?” 

"Yoshiko Akano. What the hell are you? "

(A:这里也同样如此,秋野莉子作为名字时,多是使用Akino Riko,不过……这应该也还算不上错翻。估计是将几个可能的名字读音挨个用了下。)

 鸣低下了头,捂着脸,沉默了许久才缓缓地发出这样的疑问。 

Ming bowed his head, covered his face, and was silent for a long time before slowly issuing such a question.

(A:虽然是较长的句子,这一句的翻译却还不错。)

(L:对呀!对呀!)

 秋野莉子是什么? 

What is Ishiko Akano?

 这个答案显而易见,她是鬼,是杀人的恶鬼。 

The answer was obvious. She was a ghost, a murderer.

(A:这里的第一个鬼译为ONI*日语的鬼发音 会更好,但这算不上翻译软件的错。) 

自然,鸣知道这个答案,比谁都清楚这个答案。但是,他还是发问了,对着就在自己眼前的鬼发问了。 

Naturally, Ming knew the answer better than anyone else.

 “嗯……我是秋野莉子哦,是杀人鬼。” 

"well, I'm Liko Akano. Oh, a murderer."

(A:呵呵,这里又出现了新的名字,我们的杀人鬼小姐到底该怎么称呼好呢?) 

“砰!” 

"BAM! "

 突然,鸣抬起头,狠狠地用拳砸向了两人相隔的玻璃。 

Suddenly, he raised his head and slammed his fist into the glass between the two men.

 “莉子觉得,即使这么做,也是打不到莉子的哦?” 

"Liko felt that even if he did so, she would not be able to beat her. "

(A:这里和之前

 “啊哈哈,倒还真是正常而普通的理由呢。”,说道正常而普通这几个字的时候,鸣很明显加重了语气,“一点也不像杀人鬼呢。” 

"Ah ha ha, that's a normal and common reason," he said. "it's not like a murderer at all."

的错译有异曲同工之妙,即使是主人的脑袋也能简单看出吧。)

(L:我的脑袋怎么了啦!) 

“神田悠这个名字,你还记得么?” 

"do you remember the name Kanda? "

 “嗯,一个奇怪摩托车大叔嘛。” 

"well, a strange motorbike uncle."

 “啊哈哈,没错、没错。”,不知道出于什么原因,鸣笑了笑,“那你又是为什么要杀了他?” 

"Ah ha ha, that's right, that's right." I don't know why, I don't know. I laughed. "then why did you kill him?" "

(A:这里中间段的翻译令人不明所以。)

 “因为莉子想杀。” 

"because Liko tried to kill him."

(A:在中文里,TRY有时候也会被译为“想”。)

 毫无迟疑,莉子的回答没有一丝一毫地迟疑。 

Without hesitation, Lizi's answer was not hesitant at all.

(A:呵呵,这次又变成了Lizi)

 无比自然,完完全全发自信内心的回答。 

Incomparably natural, full of confidence in the heart of the answer.

(L:啊!它翻成了自信!)

(A:不对哦,主人,你仔细读。这段话是原文就写错了。)

(L:哈……诶,好像真的诶。)

(A:呵呵,在抱怨其他人怎样的时候,也要注意看自己有没有错哦

(L:我又没抱怨……不如说翻译软件又不是人啦。)

简单扼要的回答,完完全全地阐述了她夺走“神田悠”这个人的生命的全部理由。 

A brief answer, completely describes all the reasons why she claimed "you Kanda of this person's life.

 “……”鸣站了起来,转过身去,他在心里嘲笑自己。 

"." he stood up and turned, and he laughed at himself in his heart.

 他到底想从鬼的口中得到些什么呢? 

What exactly does he want from the ghost?

 只是得到更多……对于她,对于杀人鬼,对于秋野莉子的恨意么? 

Just get more. For her, for murderers, for Akano Liko hate?

 不,并非如此。 

No, not so.

 鸣知道,就算过了这么久,夜始终没有放下那一天的事情。 

Ming knew that even after so long, the night had never let go of that day.

(A:夜先生的名字被错译为了Night,不,不如说这或许不能叫错译。) 

神田悠,死亡的那一天。 

Kanda, the day of death.

(A:在of后面加上his即可)

 他希望,做出这一切的那个犯人,能够稍微一点点可以令人原谅的地方。 

He hoped that the prisoner who had done all this would have a little to forgive.

(A:嗯……这里的prisoner应该换为killer一类的词)

 哪怕只是一点微不足道的事情。 

Even a trivial thing.

 如此一来,他便可以说服自己放下,他便可以劝阻夜。 

In this way, he could persuade himself to let go and he could dissuade the night.

 那个杀人鬼已经被绳之于法,我们已经没有必要继续抱着仇恨活下去了。 

The murderer has been brought to justice and we no longer have to live with hatred.

 忘掉已经死去的人,彻底忘记杀人鬼的事情。 

Forget the dead, forget the killer.

 但是,现在的鸣,做不到了。 

But now , it won ' t be done .

 秋野莉子,彻头彻尾的杀人鬼。即使如此!她人类的身体却只有12岁……对……仅仅是12岁。 

Yuko Akano, a complete murderer. Even so! Her human body is only 12 years old. Yes. Just 12 years old.

 如果是人类的话,还只是一个小孩子。 

If it's human, it's just a child.

 在那个“笑面记者”的帮助之下,这个十二岁的鬼……能够以死来偿还她犯下的罪么? 

With the help of the "smiling face reporter", can the 12-year-old ghost repay her sin by dying?

 不可能,她肯定会被假释。 

No way. She'll be paroled.

 或许……还会有舆论谴责警方竟指责一个十二岁的少女为犯人吧。 

Maybe. There will be public opinion accusing a twelve-year-old girl of being a prisoner.

 哈哈哈,真是可笑。 

Ha ha ha, that's ridiculous.

 鸣一边笑一边狠狠地跺脚,仿佛要把什么东西给踩碎。 

He laughed and stamped his feet as if he were about to crush something.

 他再一次回头看了看莉子,莉子鲜红色的双眼也正盯着她。 

He looked back at Liko, whose bright red eyes were staring at her.

 “我不会原谅你的,绝不会,秋野莉子。” 

"I won't forgive you, never, Liko Akano."

 “嗯。” 

"Mm-hmm."

 莉子带着笑容,轻轻地点头。 

Lizi nodded gently with a smile.